I think GOD'S PLAY is a fun debut. Lynn weaves together a variety of mythologies in an original fashion and writes top-notch character interaction. The few domestic scenes are particularly well done. She even manages to weave in flashbacks fairly organically. However, there is a very large cast, so I wish there had been more time to develop more of the characters. (And maybe some time to deal with the age gap between sixteen-year-old Toby and been-around-for-decades William.) I wish that Cassie had played a more active role in the climax or made more of a personal change to give her point of view equal weight. Still, if there are any sequels in the future, I'd be happy to give them a try.